Selasa, 27 Mei 2014

Narrative Text I



Admire My Friend

This is a story of my Senior High School period. Senior high school period was the most beautiful time I ever passed. It is also the awkward moment of my life. When I was senior high school I have someone who I really adored since I was in second grade. At the time was the first day of my new semester when I met him. I was very disappointed when I know my best friend got different class from me. Oh my Goodness, I felt like I came to a new place with many strangers around me. But everything has changed when I saw his face. He smiled to me and I felt many butterflies inside my stomach. He got closer to me with his smile and asked me to sit with him. Then I forgot about my best friend for a while. I did not when I started to become his secret admirer. I never knew he was very popular. Became a secret admirer for two years was not easy because I had to struggle with his fanatic fans, I did anything to make him sympathy with me, I had to be tough when I knew he had a girlfriend.
At first, I used to enjoy my days because I spent a lot of time beside him especially at the classroom. But it did not stay for a long time. Do you ever seen what happen with the beautiful flower in your school’s park? There were many butterflies around it. It also happened with him. He became flower boy in my school and he used to be surrounded by many girls. He was very popular and many girls adored him. They are beautiful, smart, attractive but selfish. When they knew I had feeling to him they were very angry. I did not understand. It was not their businesses if I adored him or not. I did not disturb them any way. Then the girls who adored him, bullied me. They bullied me more than once. They spread rumor about me and teasing me. I was never pretty as a girl. They teased me mercilessly for it. I cried easily.  They made name-calling for me, embarrass me in public then they laughed at my back. That was so terrible. I had tried to move from my school and my parents were so angry with me. They asked what happened to me. My mother supported me to face my friends at school. Because of her I got my spirit back. I had to struggled and faced thee girls who bullied me at school. I had to proof them that I would never give up d made them regret of bullied me.
I tried to move up and made him loved me. I did anything to be his idol. I began to search everything about him. I asked his friend about his favorite color, favorite food and favorite drink. It was Monday when I tried to cook his favorite cakes and gave it to him. I was surprised when he said that he did not like the cake.  I was very disappointed. Furthermore I shared the caked with the other friend in my classroom. He liked a smart girl. I studied hard and tried to get high scores in every exam. I also joined a competition where he could be my rival. I did my best. Finally I could be a winner in that competition and got higher rank than him. I was proud of myself.
By the time he became my best friend. He was a nice friend. He cared to me and used to make me smile. One day he told me that he had a new girlfriend. I felt stormy in my sunny day.  I could be tough when he used to talk about his girlfriend to me because I realize the fact that he was happy with her. Looking him having a date around me made me jealous. Moreover when he fought with his girlfriend in front of me made me jealous too.
It was not easy become secret admirer for two years because I had to struggle with his fanatic fans; I had to work and study hard to make him interested to me and I had to be tough when he already had a girlfriend.

7 komentar:

  1. such an interesting story of secret admirer, very good content ayu ^^

    BalasHapus
  2. mind you mechanic please. To begin a sentence, it is not good to use "but".
    I did not when I started to become his secret admirer. I never knew he was very popular => what do you mean?

    BalasHapus
  3. the same thing like what padmitri said
    the story pace is quite fast and i like it
    anyway, be strong.. love is tough

    BalasHapus
  4. well how a nice story Ayu. I was thinking that your are patient girl and how stupid that boy who never know you love to him. My comment for your writing is you have o consider when you use special word and make readers feel confused because it was ambiguous, probably you have to give a little bit explanation with your special word, but over all I love the story..Good job Ayu and don't forget to visit my blog

    BalasHapus
  5. Adi@thank you Adi but I think I looked very silly in that story.

    BalasHapus
  6. padmitri@thanks for reading my story Ayu. Next time I will make it better
    bhisma@ thank you Bhism, it's good to be tough
    andriani@thank you for support me Angga, i have visited your blog anyway,,,,

    BalasHapus
  7. well, it's really nice story, i don't know that you have passed with something like this

    BalasHapus