Selasa, 27 Mei 2014

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Fashionable Friend


True friendship will never end. I hope so. I met her for the first time on the first day when I came to this department. I never know that we will become closer like now. I am lucky to have friend like her. She is attractive, creative, has good personalities, and understands me.
She is a beautiful girl. She is tall and has a perfect body. She has long straight hair. The colour is brown. She tints her hair for many times so she has different hair colour every semester. She has oval face. The colour of her eyes is black and she has birth mark near her left eye. She has sexy lips. She always uses a colourful lipstick on her lips. She has tan complexion. I do not know why she is not comfortable with her complexion. For me her complexion is beautiful. I think it is more suitable for her to has tan complexion than fair complexion. In addition, she is very fashionable. She always looks beautiful with her clothes.
She likes drawing something. She is very talented in it. She has ever drawn her boyfriend face and her drawing is very similar to him. She also likes to design her clothes like dress or shoes. She likes a unique design. Sometimes I think that her clothes is weird because I never seen it before but she usually become a trendsetter.
She is a good girl. At the first time I saw her, I thought she was not a kind girl but then I know I was wrong. She is a kind girl. I call her Miss Smile because she smiles to every people that she meets. She is cheerful girl. She can cheers up the situation. She is a polite person and it makes her has a lot of friends. She is honest person so I often told my problem to her.
Beside my mother, she is the most understand person to me. She always knows my fake smile. She knows my needs. When I was sad, she could make me in good mood again. When I am not confident with myself, she often supported me.
I am very lucky to have friend like her. She is attractive and very fashionable girl. She is very talented in drawing and designs something. She also has good personalities that make me comfort to share my problems with her. She very understands me and always supports me. She is my best friend.

5 komentar:

  1. well you should happy to have friend who can understand you, because it is hard to find a real friend in a real life :)

    BalasHapus
  2. Sorry, the intro.. what style it was ? quoting ?
    if it is then please use "...." (quoting mark) to make it clearer
    anyway, it's an interesting story

    BalasHapus
  3. Good job Padmi,
    I think that you need to pay attention with grammar, like "She likes a unique design. Sometimes I think that her clothes is weird because I never seen it before but she usually become a trendsetter." should be "She likes an unique design. Sometimes I think that her clothes are weird because I have never seen it before but she usually become a trendsetter.
    Overall, your writing is good and so interesting....

    BalasHapus
  4. Yeyen@ it's true Yen, I'm very lucky have best friends in my life
    Bhisma@ Yes Bhis, i use quoting actually in my every writing. Thank you for your advise because it is very useful.
    Ita@Thank you for reading and correcting my story Ita, i will make the better one.

    BalasHapus
  5. Keep your friendship, then it will become powerful chain

    BalasHapus