Fashionable Friend
True
friendship will never end. I hope so. I met her for the first time on the first
day when I came to this department. I never know that we will become closer
like now. I am lucky to have friend like her. She is attractive, creative, has good
personalities, and understands me.
She
is a beautiful girl. She is tall and has a perfect body. She has long straight
hair. The colour is brown. She tints her hair for many times so she has
different hair colour every semester. She has oval face. The colour of her eyes
is black and she has birth mark near her left eye. She has sexy lips. She
always uses a colourful lipstick on her lips. She has tan complexion. I do not know
why she is not comfortable with her complexion. For me her complexion is beautiful.
I think it is more suitable for her to has tan complexion than fair complexion.
In addition, she is very fashionable. She always looks beautiful with her
clothes.
She
likes drawing something. She is very talented in it. She has ever drawn her
boyfriend face and her drawing is very similar to him. She also likes to design
her clothes like dress or shoes. She likes a unique design. Sometimes I think
that her clothes is weird because I never seen it before but she usually become
a trendsetter.
She
is a good girl. At the first time I saw her, I thought she was not a kind girl
but then I know I was wrong. She is a kind girl. I call her Miss Smile because
she smiles to every people that she meets. She is cheerful girl. She can cheers
up the situation. She is a polite person and it makes her has a lot of friends.
She is honest person so I often told my problem to her.
Beside
my mother, she is the most understand person to me. She always knows my fake
smile. She knows my needs. When I was sad, she could make me in good mood
again. When I am not confident with myself, she often supported me.
I
am very lucky to have friend like her. She is attractive and very fashionable
girl. She is very talented in drawing and designs something. She also has good
personalities that make me comfort to share my problems with her. She very
understands me and always supports me. She is my best friend.

well you should happy to have friend who can understand you, because it is hard to find a real friend in a real life :)
BalasHapusSorry, the intro.. what style it was ? quoting ?
BalasHapusif it is then please use "...." (quoting mark) to make it clearer
anyway, it's an interesting story
Good job Padmi,
BalasHapusI think that you need to pay attention with grammar, like "She likes a unique design. Sometimes I think that her clothes is weird because I never seen it before but she usually become a trendsetter." should be "She likes an unique design. Sometimes I think that her clothes are weird because I have never seen it before but she usually become a trendsetter.
Overall, your writing is good and so interesting....
Yeyen@ it's true Yen, I'm very lucky have best friends in my life
BalasHapusBhisma@ Yes Bhis, i use quoting actually in my every writing. Thank you for your advise because it is very useful.
Ita@Thank you for reading and correcting my story Ita, i will make the better one.
Keep your friendship, then it will become powerful chain
BalasHapus