Name : Putu Sri Ayu Padmi
Class : 3B
NIM : 1212021042
Topic
sentence : Easy
steps to tidy a messy room after having party
Topic : Tidy a messy room
Controlling
idea : Following
every step
Supporting
idea :
Tidy
a messy a room after having a party is not as difficult as we thought. These are
easy steps to tidy a messy room after having a party. When we have a party, we use
cassette for listen to music. First, put the cassette and also the telephone on
the table. Second, repair the position of the cup lamp. There are so many things
are not in the right place. Third, we must put the socks, shoes and the sweater
in the wardrobe. Fourth, make the chair, sofa, clock and painting in the
certain place. Fifth, put the book in the shelf. Party always left a lot of
rubbish. Then, pull the rubbish such as: hat birthday, tin, pizza and balloon to
the dump. We almost finish it. After pull the rubbish, take the sweep and clean
the floor. And the final touch, set the carpet on the floor. Finally, we have
tidy the messy room after having party. It easy, isn’t it?
I like your writing....
BalasHapusI think that you can organize the sentence well....
good but you have to consider the grammar
BalasHapusself become shelf
Following the every step " without the " and step become step
ita@ thanks ita
BalasHapuspadmitri@thank you for your advice, i will correct it as soon as i can ^^