Senin, 30 September 2013

how to clean a messy room after having party


Name               : Putu Sri Ayu Padmi
Class                : 3B
NIM                : 1212021042

Topic sentence                        : Easy steps to tidy a messy room after having party
Topic                                      : Tidy a messy room
Controlling idea                      : Following every step
Supporting idea                      :
*      Put the cassette and the telephone on the table.
*      Repair the position of the cup lamp.
*      Put the sock, shoe, and sweater in the wardrobe.
*      Make the chair, sofa, clock and painting in the certain place.
*      Put the books in the shelf.
*      Pull the rubbish such as: hat birthday, tin, pizza and balloon to the dump.
*      Take the sweep and clean the floor.
*      Set the carpet on the floor
Tidy a messy a room after having a party is not as difficult as we thought. These are easy steps to tidy a messy room after having a party. When we have a party, we use cassette for listen to music. First, put the cassette and also the telephone on the table. Second, repair the position of the cup lamp. There are so many things are not in the right place. Third, we must put the socks, shoes and the sweater in the wardrobe. Fourth, make the chair, sofa, clock and painting in the certain place. Fifth, put the book in the shelf. Party always left a lot of rubbish. Then, pull the rubbish such as: hat birthday, tin, pizza and balloon to the dump. We almost finish it. After pull the rubbish, take the sweep and clean the floor. And the final touch, set the carpet on the floor. Finally, we have tidy the messy room after having party. It easy, isn’t it?

3 komentar:

  1. I like your writing....
    I think that you can organize the sentence well....

    BalasHapus
  2. good but you have to consider the grammar
    self become shelf
    Following the every step " without the " and step become step

    BalasHapus
  3. ita@ thanks ita
    padmitri@thank you for your advice, i will correct it as soon as i can ^^

    BalasHapus